I watch my daughter dance
moving with a rhythm I wasn’t graced
the music of the world
pulsing through copper wires
we sing together
and I lose the tune
a fleeting dissonance
we won’t remember
I raise my hands
and picture my mother’s
open palms pumping
to a jealous god
my sisters and brother in a row
a nuclear family before impact
the sanctuary reverberates
with the sound
of our praise
This is so good, Josh. I love the movement. It gave me goosebumps.
I love this stanza: “I raise my hands / and picture my mother’s / open palms pumping / to a jealous god.”
Beth’s right… “open palms pumping / to a jealous god”. That’s a great image. One that’s gonna stay with me… like a bur stuck to your sock.
Interesting too, how you have three generations of Iwatas in this one… your kids, your siblings, and your mom. A span of like 30 years is compressed, and then extracted, with a few elegant images.
Thanks for sharing. It’s a treat whenever you let one out.